All Comments on 'Raindrop Kisses'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Straight Fantasy - not in a bad way.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Sandra's "O" was pretty good. Nice job.

MigbirdMigbirdalmost 2 years ago

Thoroughly enjoyable; you created an intriguing set of uniquely interesting characters, delightfully witty/bawdy dialogue, and a fun surreal storyline. Captured so well Jill’s emotional/sexual journey/emergence — rescued in the Nick of time by a band of rowdy sapphic witches. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

KarenCDFLKarenCDFLalmost 2 years ago

Good story! And you ended it with a new beginning!

Thank you!

neotoyneotoyalmost 2 years ago

fun! really loved how much wonderfully descriptive detail you packed into each scene, it really painted a vivid picture, both emotionally and sexually.

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Most of my works are told from the woman's point of view. It's not that I long to be a woman, although I've sometimes said I'm really a lesbian trapped in a man's body. The reason is because it's the woman's emotional response that interests me, not the mechanics of the act. W...