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All Comments on 'Rainy Day (Scenario)'

by KittyCode907

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
editing

Please get someone to edit your stories before publishing, or at least read them out loud. The change is tense is jarring.

KittyCode907KittyCode907almost 7 years agoAuthor
thank you Anonymous

It is a Scenario, so meant to have that rough edge on it. Thank you for the suggestion.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Keep it up please :)

Loved the scenario, glad to see they knew each other and weren’t about to have random unprotected sex! Keep it up please!

nixroxnixroxabout 3 years ago

I liked it - 5 for you

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Writer that wants to expand and explore another aspect of writing for myself and hopefully others that will enjoy my work. I like to write Horror and dark subjects that get the adrenaline pumping. I also love cats.