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All Comments on 'Rainy Evening Surprise'

by JRELH

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AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Denise and Denis???? Not a bad story but how about Denise and Ralph, or Mike or Jim or... you get the picture.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

The switch from third person to first person in the middle of a paragraph was sort of off-putting

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