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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Editor,

please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Are you old enough to be writing these types of stories? The writing was childish. If you insist on writing, get an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
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Half the time it says "Cecil" and half the time it says "Carl". Just some constructive criticism, re-read your story before you complete it. To begin with, I thought there was two different men. I do believe you have potential though.

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