All Comments on 'Randy Ravishes Me'

This is pornography. It’s written for someone, man or woman, for masturbation. No matter how badly written there has to be a story, not a collection of events, and is supposed to be erotic in some way.

I did say that up front. You could have stopped reading at any time.

A good old jack your cock, or finger your cunt story. Yes it's porn, yes it's fucking nasty. And yes I want to read more.

I don't think anyone is protesting porn on a porn site. Probably more that it's JUST porn with no story at all, no characterizations, no conversation that doesn't have to do with fucking or dicks or cunt, no insight into anyone's personality, feelings, etc.

That's fine. It certainly has a place here and an audience for sure. You do write well, but for someone who likes a story, it's disappointing.

Both raunchy and imaginative. I'm going to have to wait for your next instalment...

I like this story honestly I’m just here for the porn sometimes and this is perfect. Usually I just skip the ‘story’ anyway.

Nasty. Wonderful. Right to the point. Just as you promised up front. Sometimes you just want the goods. Well done.