All Comments on 'Rare Breed Revisited'

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canndcanndabout 13 years ago

thanks for letting us get a view of the babies. I don't remember if you told us that they were leyland's grandkids so that was a nice surprise. nice story

willieonewillieoneabout 13 years agoAuthor
LOL

Glad you liked it. No I hadn't mentioned it before but I figured I already had the perfect pack for Zane to belong to. So making Leyland his dad seemed right. Since his sister is already a hybrid they all fit in very nicely with the pack. I already knew that his dad was a loving grandfather and would adore all his new grandchildren.

mokkelkemokkelkeabout 13 years ago

it's nice to know it all turned out for the best and i'm pretty sure leyland knows why he's being asked to take the kids once a week hihi

was a joy to read.

lucianloverlucianloverabout 13 years ago
Haha!!!

Ok so for some reason the names really cracked me up!!!!!

So the council allowed them to live?!

resapooresapooabout 13 years ago
Tivo?

I love the names. :D

Cedar_NeedleCedar_Needleabout 13 years ago
Too short!

I wanted more, but all good stories must eventually come to an end. I bet settling on 14 names was a brat of an effort, but kudos to you that you did. I love the tie in to Reunited (sigh), but it was too quick and then over before we got to feel the love and devotion. I do hope you carry on and expand the story so we can be sucked into the world you’ve created : -)

Now, start writing! LOL!

katgoddess1katgoddess1over 12 years ago
Disappointing

Tacit, Tad and TiVo? I really think you could have found better names for girls than those. The story is cute, but brief.

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