All Comments on 'Rasheed and Serena's BDSM Service'

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SenorDomSenorDomover 2 years ago

Well done! Good foundation for many more perversions and scenarios.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This was a joy to read. Your sentences are clear, grammatical, and highly descriptive. This is the kind of story we look for when we want to experience good erotic literature.

nakedguyatxnakedguyatxover 1 year ago

Great premise. Good execution. Well written. More detail on the sex would be even better.

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I'm a recovering university professor. Now that I no longer need to plough through student essays by the hundreds, I can have more fun writing erotic stories. I'm still polishing my craft, and hope one day to be able to write like some of the best practitioners of the genre – ...