All Comments on 'Raveena the Social Worker'

I hope this is chapter 1 of several!!!!

Is there more to this?

Wtaf

It looks like we have another troll in the group. The bridge is full of them.

Another 12 year olds fantasy dont you check the age of the writers.

What do you mean, he's not a cuck, she made him one.

Yeah, right! Who believes this crock of shit?

That escalated quickly!

Just so unrealistic not to say rubbish

Slut

Why do yah put it in humor?! It wasn’t funny, more like stale imbecile piss.

Oh crap, it’s in LW, yah stupid or something?

Dhuuu, trying to qualify fo lowest in the latrine level? Ok, yah succeed, yo a joke as scribbler.

Captcha

Really?

Cheating bitch degrades no one but herself.

I USUALLY DON'T LIKE STORIES THAT END MARRIAGES. THI ONE SHOULD END WITH WIFE GETTING KICKEDD OUT. SHE'S A TOTAL SLUT AND LOSER.

Good story!

In your story you mention "This story deals with a cheating wife, no cuckolding, but it also contains degrading dialog.". Are you sure there is no cuckolding? I am suere there is, eventhough the husband is not aware...

No story here.

So she's going to fuck the Coach every day and the husband will never know. You forgot the part where husband finds out and takes Coach down to the basement unconscious and strings him up then zip ties his cock and balls leaving him for a couple of days till it rots off.

Cuckolding is the act of extra marital sex by a woman. Whether the husband is aware, consents or not is irrelevant. It is the act of sex with somebody else that makes him a cuckold. Wanting to define it any other way just to save yourself from having been cuckholded is just denying the truth

Another stupid slut who chooses a big cock fucking her for a few hours over the love of her husband and her family 24/7 for the rest of her life . Why would any rational person risk that ? Is it worth the risk ? If she loses her husband does she think she’s traded up ? Coach is a brutal ,self centered , abusive prick who already has a stable of married hoes so she has to share him with his harem ? To top it off - she is a social worker who just actively partook in extremely anti-social behavior ! I can’t believe anyone would be that stupid , especially someone so highly educated and previously so happily married !

You did not warn enough so I read the shit

When your tale begins, the husband is extolling the fact that his wife isn't just beautiful but also admired by all.

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By the end of the story, the omniscient point of view had taken over, because hubby certainly couldn't have known what occurred at Coach's house. And if Raveena is going to be carrying on an out-of-control affair, she will no longer be considered admirable, and possibly not even Beautiful.

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I come to LW to read about adventurous fictional people whose behavior I will never replicate. Wow. I found someone whose behavior I couldn't replicate even if I tried.

Who writes this kind of crap?

Amateurish erotica.