All Comments on 'Ravished Ch. 01'

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BellaKKBellaKKover 4 years ago
Too short

Voted low because way too short

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good start

Don’t take criticism too hard, it’s a good start. Just because we’re on an erotic story website there’s no reason not to build your characters and plot.

Tess (UK)

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Come on

It's spelled waist.

Anonymous
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