All Comments on 'Ray's Ring Ch. 02'

by julybear7

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
too short,put them together

chapter is to short.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 13 years ago
I like the sci/fi aspect of the story concept

Super powers could be very hard not to use for his own pleasure.

Good chapter, thanks

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