All Comments on 'Reaching Out'

superb need more chapters now

Interesting story is there a second chapter

Good story . But ending was to quick and unnecessary. Not your normal standard.Perhaps part two will be better. I am only giving it a two.

Excellent start - are you thinking of a second chapter

To Liketall1, I'm sorry you didn't like this story. The ending was intended to be a cliffhanger for part 2. I don't know what you mean that it is not up to my normal standards. I often get the complaint that my endings are too quick, but you are the first to indicate that my ending was unnecessary. What exactly do you mean by that?

joeehartley

Another great story - Thank you so much.

Like other commenters, felt rushed. More chapters to develop the characters, i would like to know ages, employed/retired etc

*****Good start to a hot series😮. I was wonder where you were? Thanks for sharing.

Nice start, gave it a 4. I know your planning a few more chapters.

To hotbed, You indicated that you didn't know if the characters were retired or not. I did address that early in the story, most are retired.

"It was an older neighborhood with most who lived here being retired and not very active."

Your comment about it feeling rushed, I addressed to you personally, check your e-mail.

You need a proofreader to catch the many writing errors.

To Prfsr, I apologize for any errors in my work. I do have an editor, but no one can catch everything. I also read my work several times before I submit, looking for errors.

If you can point out the errors that you notice, I'll gladly correct them on my master.

Fantastic! A few errors in grammar and syntax but nothing major.

Great story. Well written as always!

Loved it Joe I hope it becomes a series

I get really irritated at readers who downgrade an author for not writing the story they wanted to hear. Each story, I believe, deserves to be judged for what it is, on the basis of what it is. If someone wants a different story, let them write it!

This is a sweet and gentle story about two sweet and gentle people who possess the maturity to accept each day's gifts as they come.

I'm glad to see that you plan to extend the story with additional installments.

5 stars.

Very good story well written and looking forward to reading more as they move forward in their relationship. Keep writing.

Enjoyed the story

Looks a good plot line but a bit short on details, needs a bit more padding

I can’t wait to read the next part. Very romantic. I liked all their slow passion building with some great foreplay. I’m going to part 2. Keep it coming please