by Demiurging
Oh boy, I was really happy that a new chapter of this appeared... until I read it. I've noticed that all your stories had a gay-ish subliminal undertone, with all the sperm-tasting by a man, the gay porn, things transforming into a cock and whatnot, but you went full speed ahead with it in this chapter, with Harry being blown multiple times by a man the whole time.
And not happy with that, you added scat, non-consentual/reluctance, domination/denigration, and Memi was a minor character in this chapter, only appearing for a short time at the beginning and at the end.
You really dropped the ball on this one. Sorry, but I didn't like it. Just my honest opinion. The best part though, was Memi practicing cooking, and when she was reading a manga, a cute side of her that we never saw in the first chapter.
The rest of the chapter... nope. Couldn't digest it.