All Comments on 'Ready Ch. 02'

Hot!!

It is about time that there is someone that can write a story about interracial couples and put some hot heat into it! Very interesting story and I hope that this writer continues to add to this couple. GREAT READ!!!

Truley a great love story. Like to see more of this love story. Great writing skills. Keep up the great job!

I cannot wait to see what this author has next for these two.

.........But. Ach, there's always a but, isn't there?

The unfolding tale is lovely. But,there are so many people in it, that makes it a bit hard to keep up.

At this stage, maybe you'd be better to concentrate on just a few?

Never mind my nitpicking, just keep writing. You are good, and have the potential to be better. Do it!

I'm waiting for the bottom to drop any sentence now. lol. I like your writing style and the tale, but it's going a little too smoothly for my taste. I need conflict. :)

A story with a black male and white female where the black guy isn't some asshole thug and the white woman isn't a slut. Those got old real fast. Thank you for being creative and not following the tired old narrative.