All Comments on 'Ready to Please Ch. 01'

I liked your first story very much and hope you will continue writing and sharing your stories with us. Thanks!

So sexy and erotic.

These stories are amazing. I hope you keep writing more

Thanks for the comments of support everyone. I wrote a second part and another in on its way. Let me know what you think and how I can improve them.

Good premise.

But cunnilingus, when it happens, begins too abruptly. Continues to her orgasm too quickly.

Needed some sort of segue before he goes down on her. Perhaps some dialog about how she's been thinking about what he said, and can't get it out of her mind. She's been so turned on ever since he mentioned it. How she loves to have her pussy eaten. How long it's been since she's had an oral orgasm. Would he really like to do it? Would he like to see her pussy? Would he like to touch it? Kiss it?

She can see by the bulge in his pants that he's hard. Please show it to me.

Three stars.

5.0 = 💯% = A+ (❤💛💚💙💜 = ☆☆☆☆☆)!

I loved it!

I loved it!

I loved it!

Thank you for this story.

I will check out your other stories.