All Comments on 'Real Estate Power Couple Ch. 06'

by FantasyFisher

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raraewriterraraewriter11 months ago

keep it going. nice

MormonJackMormonJack11 months ago

I think I'm as frustrated as Dylan that nothing happened... yet.

Awesome. Thank you!

RWessonRWesson11 months ago

You're doing a great job on these, and unlike everyone else., no, the pace does not need to be picked up. This is a very slow seduction, and that's fine. Hopefully, you've got a few more chapters about ready to go. I can't wait for the chapter two, three, four chapters in the future when they somehow have to lose Clive because and Dylan has to go because one of the big clients is going, too, or some such. Looks like next chapter Dylan should end up getting SOME relief, finally.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

You are the ducking GOAT

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I’ll gladly wait for the next one for however long it takes

venus_canvenus_can11 months ago

Just awesome! I love the way you are developing the characters of Julie and Dylan. Unlike some of the other stories mom doesn’t fall on her knees giving her well endowed son a blowjob by the third paragraph

Venus

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago
Another good installment

Loving this so far, the build up is brilliant.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I can't wait for them to become one! It would be nice if the father could find a really nice female fushing buddy, and fall in love with her. Thanks for the story, it's my favorite one to date.

redlion75redlion7511 months ago

Mom's a fucking cock tease.he can't date or fuck other chicks or fuck her.

banyadeewana1501banyadeewana150111 months ago

Really loving the series. This part was my favorite so far! Very hot

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

wonderfull

LowStrung5LowStrung511 months ago

It was worth the wait !!! Best Story on Lit !!!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I normally don't go for the Incest stories but I'm totally hooked on this story. So well written and erotic. Can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Nice, I'll give to Dylan that dude is determined to crack her for sure. So many opportunities now opened up with the dating play. Superb

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

A good story! I hope you’ll continue with the story. We need to know what happens between mother & son.

Club_SodaClub_Soda11 months ago

I love this series. I share everyone's frustration. Personal bias, I would write in that Julie is not on birth control & is also allergic to latex, so Cliff got snipped. Then I would let that be one of the barriers Dylan has to hurdle.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Another excellent chapter, keep on with what you like 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Thank you so much for this chapter. I never read anything beautiful as your story. Keep writing. And thank you for not rushing. I love the unwillingness of Julie and made your story very believable.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I come here every day too see if there is any update of your story. Thank you so much for the update. I am a big fan of your story.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Wow . Thank you so much for the update. I have been waiting for the chapter -6 and you did a wonderful job.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Great! Really enjoyed the slow seduction. Been looking forward to this chapter. Please continue asap!!

walkindatdogwalkindatdog11 months ago

not quite the cliffhanger i was hoping for- he still, STILL, hasn't hooked his prize catch! She keeps wriggling free- they need to name a new WAFFLE for her at the waffle house. He has obviously been working the full court press, trying every which a way to snag her. Yes they love each other. Yes they have the hots for each other.

How are the first six chapters even under the incest/ taboo heading when there has yet to be any sex other than some hand-play? he hasn't even lost his sauce! And she hasn't gone over that cliff, either! It's been going sideways for too long and now i have a boner that won't quit, too! All kidding aside: love the story, love the incredibly slow burn. It certainly does keep one on one's toes. Thanks for writing- you do it well

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Very creative.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Welcome back! Great chapter looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Becoming beyond hot now that it’s all about the mother and her needs and to hell with the son’s future. I had no need for dating, especially ever since my mother pressed her black lace demi cup bra up against me..the seamed nylons..her dark bush..She had me totally wrapped around her little finger.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Most talented writers here, pace is perfect. Can't wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Another forced sex story so close to being a rapist

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Extremely awesome. It would be super hot this comes from mom's point of view more. Keep writing 👍

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Best story in literotica. Very believable. Please keep the slow phase. Love the unwillingness of Mom. You captured it so well. Thank you.

Sureshkumar85Sureshkumar8511 months ago

Very well written. Thank you

cattenicatteni11 months ago

Thankyou so much for continuing this tale. One of the best erotic fiction that I have ever read on this or any other site. Keep going this is masterful.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

You are a great author. Thank you so much for this beautiful story. The way you capture the inner conflict and unwillingness of Julie makes this story one of the best among all. Waiting for the next chapter

DevraeDevrae11 months ago

Very well written! Awesome job, checking daily for updates.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

This story is incredible. The fact that they still haven't had sex is driving me crazy, but in the best possible way. The slow burn is so fucking hot. I hope it builds to him knocking her up

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Wow! I've been waiting and waiting for chapter 6. This is the best erotic story I've ever read. Can't wait for the next chapter, and them fucking and saying I love you as husband and wife.

live4thebjlive4thebj11 months ago

Glad you made him less of an asshole this time.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Incredible buildup so far. Keep it up!

SiodisSiodis11 months ago

Absolutely loving the slow build up. Keep up the amazing work!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

super story

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Really great story. Well paced very believable. Love tbe slow burn.

FSQA2022FSQA202211 months ago

The very best Erotica

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Can't wait for you to go into more detail on the cloths he bought want to see the Clive disappear and her relationship to blossom with her son can't wait for chapter 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 etc

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Great build-up. Looking forward to next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Wonder if Cliff has any latent fantasies about giving up control, being cucked, or maybe being a sissy maid to Julie and her new husband? All kinds of possibilities exist. Or he could fall for someone who shares his love of fishing, want out of his marriage, thus freeing the new couple to ride off into the sunset in a happy ending.

Great love story. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you for listening.

nil_r2nil_r211 months ago

Wow! what a series. Read it all in one sitting. Waiting for more!!!!

Spardax212Spardax21211 months ago

Looking forward to more of this tale.

BankzBankz10 months ago

Still dreaming of the continuation of this work of art.

BankzBankz10 months ago

Still dreaming of the continuation of this work of art.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Classic story ! One of the best. Can’t wait for chapter 7

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Oh WOWWWW!!! What a fantastic story. Its beautifully written and well paced. Please continue. Thank you in advance.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Back and forth, back and forth. I understand her being conflicted, but on the same page she's ready to give herself over wth "full abandon", and a couple paragraphs later, It's back to "no, no more", etc etc. Six chapters of it, dozens of pages already. Well, I'm glad others are still enjoying it, but I'm done.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

The beauty of this story is her inner conflict and slow phase. Just love this story . Please continue for chapter 7 and many more

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Enjoy the slow burn. Can't wait for chapter 7!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Love the slow build-up, and the slow progress. Eagerly waiting for future chapters.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

best story ever written on here. Can't wait for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

How long before chapters 7 6 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 come getting a little bored wating now getting to the point were ill have to start from the beginning and read all the way through

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

eagerly waiting for the next instalment. Excellent story.

r26mr26m10 months ago

Very good stories.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Good Story, Well written. But are they ever going to have sex. There is slow burn then there is this.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

What’s the hold up on new chapters. Author should respond.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Whats the hold up on the next chapters . Keep checking I to see if anymore have been released and keep being disappointed author should give an update to when some chapters are being released. Any way suppose I'll leave it a while before I check again shame really as its truly a good story

Spardax212Spardax21210 months ago

Looking forward to more

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

We need the next chapter this series is incredible

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago
great story

next chapter please

rjb426874rjb42687410 months ago

I have followed your story from the beginning and have enjoyed very much.

It has been a little slow but good.

now that you are getting to the sex part between the Mother and Son you stopped the story

WHY????????

Please finish the story if you are unhappy with it so that we can know the ending.

THANK YOU.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

2nd time reading. Love the story, the anticipation towards the climax has been building & it's now well past time for the next installment! I am into edging to increase the stimulation & added enjoyment at the finish however, this has been quite a

long while!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

great series, please continue!

Redduster38Redduster389 months ago

Looking fwd to ch. 7

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Ladies, gents, and others, I'm getting the sinking feeling that this is going to be one of those series that goes 6 for 6 on the H status and people are asking in 2028 when the next chapter is coming. Pity, this story had some read potential.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Great story been waiting all of july for next chapter please bring out chapter 7 soone.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I’ve been checking everyday waiting for the next chapter hopefully it comes soon.

trianetriane9 months ago

Chapters 1-5 came out in under 2 weeks, then it was ~5 more weeks for Chapter 6.

It's coming up on 8 (and counting!) now and there's still no sign of Chapter 7...

It's not just the *plot* of this story that's proceeding at a snail's pace! 🙄🤨🤦‍♀️

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Well maybe he's doing the history in real time so it's getting the new materials to add the next chap becouse it's taking a life to get the next fase

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Poor Cliff. Such a shame that his fishing buddy passed away leaving his 35 year old widow carrying their first child. Of course Cliff felt compelled to comfort Amanda as she had no other family nearby. He started taking her fishing with him, one of her favorite activities. It was all innocent until others started questioning when ‘their’ baby was due, a boy or a girl, what were they going to name the child? Quashed early this could have been avoided. Now it is getting out of control. What next? Awaiting the next chapter…

NanoMax

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Well we've all been waiting for weeks guess the story ain't going to carry on shame tbh as it was very good but the lack of response let's me think that their will not be any more

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Even a tortoise is faster than the author. More than 8 weeks now since the last chapter and still no update from the author

Holistic_VoyeurHolistic_Voyeur9 months ago

Two months later and still waiting. I hate it when authors do this. I've now forgotten most of the story.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Poor Julie. Her realization that this second marriage is taking priority over the one with Cliff made her suddenly desperate to reconnect with him. She returned from Canada early hoping to surprise husband #1 as he returned from fishing. Waiting at the overlook point above the harbor Cliff always used, imagine her surprise when a pregnant woman exited Cliff’s boat just ahead of him. A very pregnant woman. OMG, what to do?

Awaiting the next chapter…

NanoMax

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Maybe we should write the next chapter. MadLibs style.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I think it was meant as an open end

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Love this story please keep it going!!!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

If you are still active on this site please continue this story. I'm fucking hooked.

Fuck what the naysayers say about not enough action. I love the slow-burn you are going for.

You have something special here please don't abandon it before it's through.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Excuse me but what the fuck?!?! You can’t leave people hanging that after such a long ass story. Julie needs to.give up that pussy and embrace this new life. Cliff needs to be married to his boat. Everyone wins. Now get on with my. Start typing!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Someone needs to shadow write a new chapter

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Great story....it has so much potential...I'm seriously jonesing for another chapter....get your ass to work!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Please ,please finish this story. It is so hot & needs to continue asap!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

What a beautiful story. It was exactly my kind. Slow burning. Please continue .

ZephyrwhirlZephyrwhirl8 months ago

The slow build on this is delicious. Very well structured, pulls the reader in. Keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Guess the author must have died, been abducted by space aliens, or ran out of ideas. O Well.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Hey Fantasy Fisher, you going George RR Martin on us?

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

A well scripted story but remains inconclusive. Appreciate if you can continue with the series and release the subsequent one. Thanks and keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

“…and he woke-up an it was all a dream…”

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

This has potential to be one of the best stories ever written on here. Bring it home Fantasyfisher!

nyx21nyx218 months ago

Great build, please continue!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Where is the next chapter, this is getting good.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

The next chapter will be epic!!!

DevraeDevrae8 months ago

It's nearly 4 months since the last chapter. I hope FF is still writing.

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