by MDSW
I hope you expand your Bradley Weber series to a sequel to your Real Love and Satisfied with Love stories, I loved the original, but yours is just as good. I loved SteveWallace's stories because the stories lasted so long, I also loved the Pool Boy series by BigZeke13, Prolonged_Debut10's series, The Morrisons series by RecHiker, Justin Thymes by Callicious, The Novelist by Nicequip, and others, mainly because they weren't one page stories but also because they had a story beyond the sex life of the characters. You have a potential to be among the greats of Literotica (Top 100 Stories and in the running on the contests), and you certainly have a future on the site just writing stories.
I enjoyed the chat between Bradley and his sisters in the helicopter. I don’t remember that in JJ's version but I do remember it becoming an issue later because Kyle did not keep his sisters in the loop. So for what it’s worth if this is your addition I did appreciate it. Thank you again for remastering this story. I’m enjoying it.
So far it is amazing. You have done a wonderful job of recreating this story. I am remembering why I love this story now.