All Comments on 'Real Love Ch. 12'

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larrys3d almost 3 years ago

I like the fleshing out of this one over the original. The original version was good, but after getting into this updated version it really reads and flows cleanly. Good work.

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I am interested in writing stories that include sex, some integrated with love and a relationship. Some writers are good at it and others aren't as lucky. I'm not a perfect writer nor a perfect person, but this is my attempt at writing. I do hope to improve with age. I hate t...

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