All Comments on 'Reality of Life with Parents Pt. 01'

I get a slow build-up, but this whole part 1 needed something else.

This just wasted time. Also, if you're going to continue writing, get yourself a dictionary. There is no such word as catches. The past tense form of the verb catch, is caught. You need to work on your prose and your typos.

When's next chapter coming???

Shocking spelling and grammar. If English is not your native language get someone to proof read and edit for you.

Unreadable

Hate it what a useless story I don't know where your from but you need to learn spelling!! 2 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What the HELL was this ??????????????????? a 2