All Comments on 'Rebecca's Fantasy'

Thanks for the read.

Terrific premise.

Nicely paced story.

Sure would have liked longer foreplay with much more description of what eack wa sdoing to the other, how each was reacting to what he/she was doing and what was being done to him/her. Perhaps some dialog about what each had fantasized about when she was the summer intern. For my taste it moved ahead much too fast as if there was a finish line that had to be crossed ASAP.

Four stars.

Nice story about two people who should have been fucking for over a year!

Why use a condom. Go bareback and hope Rebecca soon shows off a baby bump.

A beautiful, well written story. The only blemish is a poorly constructed sentence on page two that has the word “down” in it three times. Please correct that. Loved the story, loved the writing, keep it the good work.

*****Good storyline with HOT sex!! Thanks for sharing.

Very well written, nice story line and the right amount of build up and quality sets.

Very good and sexy story with a nice plot. I was glad Rebecca got what she sought and that her vampy friend didn't. Great job!

Amazing story. Great characters. Very enoyable read.

Delightful story. Well constructed, well paced. I wish I could add that it was well executed, but the text cries out for a good editor and an even better proofreader.

Nonetheless, 5 stars.

5*