All Comments on 'Rebuilding Eden'

by SimonO

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ag2507ag2507over 4 years ago

I am assuming that this is not the end. Please confirm?

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Eden

Fantastic start, looking forward to many chapters to develop the players and relationships

Jerryr6Jerryr6over 4 years ago

Good build-up for a continuing story.

BBeinhartBBeinhartover 4 years ago
Don’t worry

Read the intro, Ag

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Ditto

Loving it so far, very good, but as above ,please continue as soon as you can.

BiggaluteBiggaluteover 4 years ago
Very Good,

Enjoy your writing and loved this story, looking forward to the next instalment

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Recycled?

I'm positive I have read this before.

SimonOSimonOover 4 years agoAuthor
Not Recycled

This story initially was loosely inspired by the indie movie Act Naturally, but only in a very broad context. I don't recycle and I don't copy-and-paste. If you find it elsewhere, please let me know. Thanks.

gentlemanoffortunegentlemanoffortuneover 4 years ago
I love this!

I love this, and can’t wait to read more! Any chance Ms. Loving might decide to make a visit?

mammoetmammoetover 4 years ago
Loved it

hope there is more to come.

About The Recycled comment, i'm on this site about 10 years now maybe longer but

the feeling of reading a "new" story that i have read before is there sometimes and to be honest i have the feeling again.

That said I don't mind I love to read a good story more than once just like watching a movie several times so keep posting recycled or not.

Another thing i once started writing a story for this site but didn't finish it because it turned from a short story into a novel and couldn't see the end to it and reading it back was like a accumilation of other stories, movies and life and not forgetting fantasy, and was just to scared to post it in the end, but finally comming to my point a lot of stories are similar just other people and places and the order of events are mixed up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
other story

This story reminds me of Brookhaven Inn by HStoner

topcattoponetopcattoponeabout 4 years ago
Only one thing to say,...

I wish I had wrote this.

SunloverSunloverabout 3 years ago

Excellent story. Really enjoyed this story and the evolving of characters in this story. Well done. Looking forward to the third installment.

piet1234567piet1234567over 1 year ago

Great story, i love it

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Life gets in the way too much, so my new method involves me posting only completed stories, even those with multiple parts. That will cut down on people being frustrated. Hopefully. My compensation is essentially how much others enjoy what I write. Contacts are most welcome...

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