by SimonO
Fantastic start, looking forward to many chapters to develop the players and relationships
Loving it so far, very good, but as above ,please continue as soon as you can.
Enjoy your writing and loved this story, looking forward to the next instalment
This story initially was loosely inspired by the indie movie Act Naturally, but only in a very broad context. I don't recycle and I don't copy-and-paste. If you find it elsewhere, please let me know. Thanks.
I love this, and can’t wait to read more! Any chance Ms. Loving might decide to make a visit?
hope there is more to come.
About The Recycled comment, i'm on this site about 10 years now maybe longer but
the feeling of reading a "new" story that i have read before is there sometimes and to be honest i have the feeling again.
That said I don't mind I love to read a good story more than once just like watching a movie several times so keep posting recycled or not.
Another thing i once started writing a story for this site but didn't finish it because it turned from a short story into a novel and couldn't see the end to it and reading it back was like a accumilation of other stories, movies and life and not forgetting fantasy, and was just to scared to post it in the end, but finally comming to my point a lot of stories are similar just other people and places and the order of events are mixed up.
Excellent story. Really enjoyed this story and the evolving of characters in this story. Well done. Looking forward to the third installment.