All Comments on 'Reckless Abandon Ch. 01'

Really, when?

Great start, I can't wait to find out what happens next.

And I'm looking forward to the next chapter. One suggestion though, if you use a spell-checker it will make the readers journey into the world you are creating more complete. So far it's shaping up to be a good story and I like how you don't inundate the reader with details about the guy--leaving him mysterious.

I think I know this man...

In all seriousness, very very wonderful story. The pace was fantastic, and I have read the other chapters with just as much pleasure. I do hope you keep writing!

I think the reference to Poe's Tell-Tale Heart really drew me in at the beginning, and I am quite happy to have stumbled upon your submission.

That dance scene was the hottest I've ever read. Very impressive.