by Billyslate
Very nice start to the story. You've got my attention. I can't wait to see where this goes.
You have brilliantly written this first chapter and I cannot wait for the next chapter you write fantastic stories billyslate and the sorrow in this first chapter hopefully Kris is not dead but maybe injured and will return to Kenzie.xxx
Intriguing concept. Hot mess of typos, grammar and stilted conversation. Your stuff could be better if you got some extra eyes on it.
i like this story a lot im so looking for the next one be well happy and safe a fan shayne
Real attention seeker, could not put down.
Please let me catch up on my sleep before the next chapter 😊
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