by MissRoberta
Omg Miss Roberta,
Your chapter 2 was worth the wait. I'm so pleased Emily spoke to Sophie about it and she was happy for Emily and Ally; they really are perfect together.... Just the right amount of sugar and spice and overall cuteness of them both being in love. I know you've ended it to say that they were 'rejoycing in their happy ending's, I'm over the moon with that, but gutted it it ends here as well, I for one would love to hear more about Red and Ally, however if this is the end of your lovely story, it's definitely ended on a high note. You've got a talent! I can't wait to see what you gift us with next ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
This was a perfect chapter to follow up with. The sneaky sister and friend, the conversation while shopping, the need and desire, the act and the admission of love. Bravo! Bravo!
Of and I forgot to add how amazing their love if. You Mr Roberta share a unique style I truly love. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Not sure how I feel about this chapter. Love the romance, but I had a hard time staying focused it was a little boring .
More of this please!
Maybe a little bit of drama? Ally can be a little bit possessive, no?
Omg I can’t believe I missed this. I love the voice you gave these two. I thought I had you save as a fav, good job
This story was amazing, if there is more to it i cant wait but if not it was also ended at a perfect point where im satisfied but could definitely read more of them. You have an amazing writing style so far all the stories of yours i have read i have instantly put in my favourites!