All Comments on 'Red Clay Summer'

Dear Ant Colony:

Thank you. I am grateful for a great story.

"Red Clay" was very well paced and developed.

Wonderful protagonists with Declan and Bianca.

I have been to Chile and really liked the country and the people. I can see why Declan also liked it. Santiago in 2007 was similar to Vienna with palm trees.

I am glad that Bianca enjoyed her storage room visit so much. Your description of the sex was excellent.. However,, if it had been me with Bianca, would have just stripped Bianca's bathing suit down and off her than damaged it. As a man, I don't even want to damage blouse buttons, even if it takes 2 minutes longer.

My only confusion? That Declan and Bianca did not get together after the Florida trip. However, your ending was a good Plan B.

Now i will happily read your other stories.

Best regards from YYZ!