All Comments on 'Red River of Lust'

LOL! fun fact. In a less serious draft of the story, I originally considered titling it The River Dicks.

Second person point of view? That’s a hard pass. Having a writer tell me that I did this and I did that is off putting. Creepy almost. I only read the first couple of paragraphs, so I didn’t rate the story.

This second-person trend is a major turn-off for me. As a straight woman who doesn't have a cock and who has zero desire to have sex with another woman, I could and would do none of the things I'm being told I'm doing here. I stopped reading pretty much immediately.