All Comments on 'Red Swallow Ch. 11'

Thanks BJGoodhead for a very good read . Very sophisticated tale with much going on . The knowledge of business operations and cyber tech very much enhances the story . Looking forward to the next update .

I think her reducing her femininity with the breast reduction was an odd turn, an FFS or SRS would have been better

Absolutely loved it - apart from Ch.6&7, not my taste and didn't really fit, but I've had that whinge. Interesting and generally unpredictable but believable plot, well crafted and realistic range of characters that i cared about or wouldn't trust. I loved the way it was crafted around Dustin/Desiree's evolution. Superb ending, suspense to the last, and left me wondering where everyone's stories would go from here.

I have to agree with an earlier comment, it would make an excellent movie.

A top notch piece of writing.

Strand

is there a ch. 6 & 7 or is that a typo that we jump from 5 to 8?

The story is very well done

Chapters 6 & 7 were posted by my collaborator rrswede and are still available on Literotica.