by Soft1017
Maybe the Bros. Benson can track him down, or maybe that'll be something that Mark and Michelle take on.
I wish I could make it a series but right now I'm committed to other projects. Lol But I do appreciate the comments. Thanks so much :D!!!
plenty of potential here. i like how you didnt play on race in a negative. definitely expand on this and make it a series.
Wow, I'm so happy almost want to cry so sweet death to Margaret and mandy bitches. Wonderful story!!!!!!
It makes me happy to know that despite being an old story, it still has an effect. Im not sure if I will continue the story but I appreciate all the comments :D
I really love this story, very original and sexy. I can't wait for more work and I hope you bring them back for a little flash of their family. Please keep writing and I hope you had a great Labor Day weekend :D
Their love allowed them to redeem each other from low self-steem. I really enjoyed how you developed both Michelle as well as Mark's characters. When she commented to Mark after her encounter with Mandy that she was tired of all the drama, it let the reader know that she hadn't had a great history of being resepcted and appreciated in past relationships. In the end she has to learn to trust even more than Mark. A really great read. Thanks so much for publishing as a single edition.
That was the absolute best story I have read in a long time. Thank you.