All Comments on 'Rediscovery Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
interesting start

I like the beginning...a hot lusty couple...a woman a bit embarrassed and yet not able to stop herself and a curious sister. The next step ought to be a 'step back'...how they got to this point..maybe a little about the older sister and how the two of them discovered sex, maybe even how the older sister taught her? Good luck, nice start!

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