All Comments on 'Refi'

As good as your Matter of Size story was. This is just as bad. When doing a nonconsent/reluctant story you have to have the first person perspective of the one(s) who is being victimized. Quite a bad story.

Matter of Size was clever. This was...strange. And a very difficult technique to read.

This one does not work.

LOL

I'm so damned old and jaded not much in Literotica gets a rise out of me any more. But this one sure as Hell did!

ridiculous story all around, and having read the original, I would say that while it may be a grammatical improvement, it's not a plot improvement, it's far too one-sided. shows exactly why the blackmail is broken as fuck. if she were to actually show someone one of those videos, she'd lose her job, her standing in the industry and a whole lot more besides when the felony charges start rolling in.

And a lot better storyline.

You are in therapy, right?

That could also be in Humour and Satire. I laughed til I cried! I was in sales and I can relate to this hahaha

Ed always writing shit.

Score 1*

I liked this one, it's ridiculous and inventive. OK, yeah, gross at times and totally unrealistic, but that's fiction for you. I really liked the way they were blackmailed into being better people.

I liked the two-car with one passenger human centipede. I wondered for a half second if the Mrs was going to have to stick her tongue into the Mr. to make a three person centipede, but this worked well.

Shame on the Mr. for cheating on his wife though. LOL.

Another great one from a talented but twisted author.

With the police. The bitch spent the rest of her life in prison. Another crappy Edrider story in which there are no consequences for the perpetrators.

Edrider73 you can come up with some dandys. But gotta admit it was entertaining. Good creative work.