All Comments on 'Reflections Pt. 01'

Great start. Can't wait for more.

Incredibly intense, well written and I can't wait to see what happens next!

little interesting: 2*

Thank you for your feedback everyone 😊

Superb work by talented author. Intriguing to ponder where this introspective tale will go. Bravos.

I know this is written as a fantasy but I absolutely hate the subject material because it’s far too realistic. I can’t find anything erotic about human trafficking, fantasy or not. You might be wondering why I read this chapter if I don’t like the content, I love Reluctance stories and they’re lumped in with Non Con.

Setting all of that aside your story is very definitely a fantastic piece of writing. Incredibly tense, dramatic and ironically offering sound advice, do whatever it takes to survive. I’m looking forward to reading other stories that you submit. Thank you for sharing.

Tess (uk)