All Comments on 'Rejoining'

It had been told better. Use of quotation marks is sloppy, some never end. And her dialogue sounds like narrative, not speech. Gives her telling a false ring. Could have been a decent HotWife wife-sharing tale. Fell a little short.

Jerkoff tale with jerkoff people. Don't read this crap. I wish I didn't.

and not particularly erotic either. As someone else noted, the dialogue was, at best, strained.

A sad tale for sad people.

a complete idiot ? IQ under 40 ? or what ? no clue why you have accumulated so many letters and lined them up to words or ever better how you did that.

Thanks.

KCW - please consider the free volunteer editing option offered by LIT. It should improve the basic word-mechanic distractions in this offering. It might also help in some basic improbability problems, such as this debonair gentleman being able to quickly gin-up an equally intriguing 'third-hand' for a one-night stand. It doesn't take many 'suspension of disbelief' aspects before many readers simply answer with "Bull Shit!"

3*

The number of men who fantasize about their wives fucking other men, and even enjoying sucking their cum out of her twat. What happened in your childhood that steered you so far off the road.

Nothing erotic about finding out that your wife's a stretched out slut for other men behind your back.

in that he can dump her, TK U MLJ LV NV

Two sad people.

I honestly believe I would have killed the slut...just strangled the cheating and disrespect right out of her. What else would there be to do with such a cunt?

ROFL no person would ever find being cheated on and disrespected a fucking turn on.

Oh and this part of the title "A surprise gift from his wife" yeah some fucking nasty assed STD that would probably kill him.

Im guessing by now, since this laughably bad story is so old, you left your closet and admitted the Village People are a major turn on for you.