All Comments on 'Stranger in the Dark'

by Jasonjamesthomas

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Sexy and Well Written

You still should have finished by hubby saying how he used to do impressions in college to earn some cash, and that is why she did not recognize his voice. Still a good story.

JasonjamesthomasJasonjamesthomasover 3 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

Thanks for the feedback, @Anonymous!

If you notice, the husband never really speaks. Only whispers deeply, the few words that he does.

In my mind I felt this would realistically be enough to make the plot believable, but I'll keep your idea in mind for future works. Thanks!

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