by funperson969
That is a hoot and a holler. A just juxtaposition of discovery of and retribution upon the cheaters. 5*
Funny, well written. I don’t usually enjoy water sports but in this case an exception.
Excellent! I found that story very enjoyable. I bet it made me feel as good as the protagonist must have felt after draining his bladder. Golden showers are an under-utilized form of revenge and comedic relief.
The Mexican ending was over the top but what can we ask for when you dedicate 32 words of a 750 word story to an epilogue. (34 if you count contractions as two)
Bravo!
Not what I expected - great story! Wonder what the other wife saw by the time she got there...
Golden showers is normally a bit of a gross subject but this one was I feel thoroughly deserved. BardnotBard
Not bad. I was thinking four stars until you brought in the road-westy Mexican Whitehouse trope. Two star reduction. Two star story because of that.
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JPB NOT BOB