by justspitballing
I don't know about others, but, for me, the religious angle killed it completely.
It was more creepy than it was hot. Especially since religious nutjobs delivering their children for other's sexual pleasure isn't exactly a fantasy tale.
Dr beulahthemick; I've read some crap on this site, but this is by far the worst ever, minus five from me.
Trash. Get an editor. Half the time you said "our", it should have been "are".
MORE! PLEASE LET THERE BE MORE!
I READ THIS WITH MY WIFE AND ENDED UP FUCKING EACH OTHER'S BRAINS OUT RIGHT THERE IN THE LIVING ROOM