All Comments on 'Remembering Claudia'

I am going back and read all your submissions.

You have a fantastic way of turning a phase.

Keep it up.

Enjoy hearing back from you.

CG

This is my first contest submission to Literotica. Thanks everyone for reading and voting! I will respond to CaryGrant and others via PM. :) All my other writings are part of a series that fits into the sci-fi erotica genre.

Excellent storyline that I enjoyed very much. I also liked the almost cartoon-like illustration with the hugely exaggerated cock crammed in the petite mouth of the young heroine.

A lot of life is timing, and starting up with somebody special the day you get dumped from a long term relationship is not fortuitous. You're really not ready to risk your heart again.

But the story was written well enough to make me care about the characters, and maybe the sisters were greatful enough to keep our hero distanced from the web that would have eventually ruined his law career. It's something else to contemplate.

thank you

I did not like it at all. And the one illustration is not done well at all. Very poor presentation all together.

You may be right, there, anonymous. I really think this story could have used a little more work before submitting. The illustration is a little too in-your-face, and lacks shading and depth, and I only used one. I welcome all your feedback, particularly those that include specifics.

This was pretty good. I liked the sex description, but the whole idea of her very lenient parents seemed like a bit too much. I also can't help thinking you provided an excess of detail about what people were wearing at dinner.

Nice story, and I like the picture very much.

Why not continue this, with something like group this time, like he returns with a friend or something, and they have a sex with her? This could be quite sexy.

Good but the ending was a bit depresing

No happy ending. Too bad.