All Comments on 'Rented Cottage'

You need an editor. Sometimes Scarlet is the 'first person' "I", sometimes she's 'third person' "Scarlet". Also, there's a whole, large section of the story that's repeated.

Need to have this one taken down, edited and resubmitted. YOu've got a double posting of part of the story and I'm not sure if it ends where you meant it to.

Second the other comment - decide on a point of view and stick with it.

Very hot premise, clean up the mechanics and you've got a keeper!