All Comments on 'Repentance'

What a great story for your first submission. I'm looking forward to future works.

You hit the right balance between action, sensation, and feeling.

I wish I could get my boyfriend to treat me like that...

It was written as if he had never thought of, never considered doing the things he suddenly felt permission to do to a woman he loved. Perhaps if that had built over time, in his thinking and his time with other women it could be believed. Simply said, Unbelievable.

Well written and erotic. ! Hope there is more.