All Comments on 'Republic of Femina Island Ch. 01'

Typical male bashing story

I like where this might be going

This is my favorite story premise. Keep going!

I personally hate stupid protagonists...

Oh I´m settling into a new country and I´ve no clue about their rules or society.

Sorry I´m out.

Great story set up. Loving it. It's a lot of work writing one of these, so thank you. Hope you write more as I, for one, definitely want to read more.

Of course, the husband acts like a pussy and does nothing to stand up for his son. I doubt they would have gotten there without having some kind of understanding what would happen and what mother would put her son through such shit. I would have fought like hell for myself and my kid, right up to the time I was reunited with my wife and choked the life out of her and anyone who got in the way.

Did you have to describe rhem shifting I such detail? Ruined what might of have been a decent story.