All Comments on 'Rescued'

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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

This story is very well-written, and very romantic. Its only real flaw is its brevity. The reader is given no real explanation as to how the three characters ended up where they were at the start of the story. The ending is also not really an ending, leaving the reader wondering what is going to happen next between the characters. The love scenes are well done, but rather too short, and the story Rescued really needs to be expanded and continued.

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