by dmallord
as fractured as the main character is , there does indeed seem to be a way to help him become whole. Being along for the ride is awesome, thanks 5*s!
but it does awaken a few "memories" that have always been hard to handle. Still - It has been an interesting read and a distraction in it's own way. Keep it up!
UGH, one page? Your killing me Smalls. Please not one at a time, give us some pages, and story to get into.
When you mention ‘sex with twins’ in the summary, I suspect that most people are going to think that there’s more than one sentence to describe the sex
You can say that you met some twins, but you risk lower scores if you set expectations that you don’t deliver on
Excellent story you have really drawn us to Jim and his struggles keep up the great work look forward to the next story
A Good read, as were the previous ones. Although I do not have the horrific experiences of your character, all experiences seem to somehow mold us, and it is bringing back memories. I am enjoying your writings, Thank You !
Thank you for the follow-up to Part 1. My first thought after coming to the end of it was, "Needs a Part 2. And probably more." Good story, well developed, with interesting characters. Carry on!
Solid writing, but why not describe the enjoyment of their time together? Especially since many of us dream of time with twins.