All Comments on 'Rescuing a Snow Angel Ep. 02'

by dmallord

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Eugenia4allEugenia4allabout 3 years ago

as fractured as the main character is , there does indeed seem to be a way to help him become whole. Being along for the ride is awesome, thanks 5*s!

ArdieffArdieffabout 3 years ago

Looking forward to see where this story goes. Keep up the good work.

Many_MemoriesMany_Memoriesabout 3 years ago
I wasn't a POW -

but it does awaken a few "memories" that have always been hard to handle. Still - It has been an interesting read and a distraction in it's own way. Keep it up!

Crusader235Crusader235about 3 years ago
Arrrr

UGH, one page? Your killing me Smalls. Please not one at a time, give us some pages, and story to get into.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Misleading summary

When you mention ‘sex with twins’ in the summary, I suspect that most people are going to think that there’s more than one sentence to describe the sex

You can say that you met some twins, but you risk lower scores if you set expectations that you don’t deliver on

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Excellent story you have really drawn us to Jim and his struggles keep up the great work look forward to the next story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

You're really good at this, FYI.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A Good read, as were the previous ones. Although I do not have the horrific experiences of your character, all experiences seem to somehow mold us, and it is bringing back memories. I am enjoying your writings, Thank You !

LitCritLitCritabout 1 year ago

Thank you for the follow-up to Part 1. My first thought after coming to the end of it was, "Needs a Part 2. And probably more." Good story, well developed, with interesting characters. Carry on!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Solid writing, but why not describe the enjoyment of their time together? Especially since many of us dream of time with twins.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Simply excellent! Thank you!

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I followed the 'orphan to soldier' path that many others have. Found myself embroiled in the Vietnam mess - on the wrong side of the POW trauma. I lost some fingers and damaged a hand over there. Coming home to an unwelcoming nation, I stayed low and out of sight - still avoid...

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