All Comments on 'Rescuing Serina Pt. 01'

Too short for an introduction. It may have come to you in a dream but this sort of 'romance' story has been done to death. 1*

I understand tat this has probably been done a lot but, honestly... 90% of this came to me on the fly. The original dream wasn't NEARLY as detailed as this... In fact, in the dream I literally found "Serina" and she was "rescued"... It then immediately turned to the shower scene I am going to be putting in part 2. Thanks for your feedback but trust me when I say this is better than the original dream in a lot of ways.

Also: This was my first story ever done... *points to my profile* And the only one I have ever submitted online before... Ever. But, anyway, thanks for the feedback! I'll keep this in mind for my next story, if I ever make one.

These one page jobs should have categories of there own