All Comments on 'Resolute Love'

and hard to read. No rhyme or reason for much of anything. After the first two pages, it lost any appeal that it had from the muddled beginning, I tried to pick up a point at the end and never found it.

1 Star

I do like your stories, and have enjoyed reading Champion's Champion.

In my opinion, however, this story does not belong in LW category.

This story still belongs in SciFi / Fantasy.

I expect LW stories to have these elements as follows:

1. Willing cuckold

2. Unwilling cuckold (rape of LW doesn't qualify)

a. Those that wimp out

b. Those that take action/get revenge

3. Infidelity with reconciliation of some type

4. Actual loving, with no cheating, etc.

But thank you for telling us that it was a Sci-Fi story before I started reading it. I will not rate it as I have not read it.

Good story, a bit hard to learn the universe and terms, but all came clear in the end. I liked it and wouldn't mind a second chapter or prequel.

Thanks.