All Comments on 'Resort'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Did the car get a respray

Did it change colour

ShadowRosieShadowRosieover 4 years ago
The Rest Of It

Where's the rest of the story? Is there a plot? Is there an ending? Having the story just quit doesn't help.

AloneTooLongAloneTooLongover 4 years ago
Blue mustand?

and a couple of hours later it is a red mustand?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Tense?

You need to make your tense consistent - either past or present - pick one.

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