All Comments on 'Responsibility Ch. 20'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Beautiful poetic debauchery

If I hadn’t just read it I wouldn’t have thought it was possible to read a stunningly raunchy sexual encounter described in language so beautiful. What under other circumstances would be considered a down to earth scene of a man giving pleasure to his wife was instead a work of art all on its own.

Now if only she could fall in love with him.

Tess (UK)

pk2curiouspk2curiousover 3 years ago

IDK if she will ever let her guard down enough to enjoy and to give joy . I don't think she understands that concept . IDK if the story is over ? It seems so .

pk2curiouspk2curiousover 3 years ago

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Hi! This is DreamerByTheDiamonds! I just wanted to let you know that my Responsibility story isn't finished yet. I still have more chapters to write. Thank you for reading. :)"

Well thank you for that very quick response . I am glad to hear this story is continuing . It is an incredible story . I think it is one of your best . The realms in which your stories are based in . Are something so foreign and different from anything I have read before . Just so intriguing . You are incredibly talented .

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