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by Tayls77

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MsNotSleepingMsNotSleepingabout 8 years ago
Nice

Sweet. Sensual. I'm feeling relaxed just reading it. :)

Good job (pun intended).

WillieTurnerWillieTurnerabout 8 years ago
Good job!

I guess, technically, it was BDSM, but it was a more gentle and sweeter sort. It wasn't wanking material, so much as it was a story of people looking out for each other.

A little rough around the edges, but over all, rather well written too!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Awesome!

Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Very sensual.

Quite nice to read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Very nicely done, Tayls77. Andie sounds like the ideal roomie! I'm curious though. Half Filipino, half Caucasian is kind of an unusual, exotic mix. Did you have a certain someone in mind when you wrote this? ;)

C

Sucker4BoobiesSucker4Boobiesover 7 years ago
Exciting!

The banter between Andie and Alex was inspired and witty. Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
NOTHING WRONG HERE....

Except that he didn't immediately suck all the juice out of Andi's body through her vagina.

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