by StackedAction
Lovely to read a story about how a relationship can work between two normal adults, who sometimes likes a bit of kinky fun.
Sometimes it's a swing and a miss, and sometimes it's just what was needed indeed.
It definitely depicts a strong relationship. It is true that some days benefit from an intense interlude as a pressure value. The sexual scene was well written from an action stand point. However, I'm just left cold by it all. The sex was too impersonal. I suppose a wash cloth and glass of water is a kind of aftercare...maybe...a little bit... . The reconnect on the deck feels both sadly realistic and too minimalistic.
For me, this wouldn't be a good ending for a craptastic day.
Sometimes you don't know what you need until you get it.
Listen, pay attention and stop when it's not working and sometimes you hit it on the head.