All Comments on 'Restroom Rendezvous'

Hello readers, this is my second offering and this is the result of all the motivation and inspirations I received for my first story The IT Guy. So keep reading and post your feedback, be it negative or positive, I welcome all. Thanking you all.

In a store, at a party, or in a club nice little place for quicky lub.

Thanks for the read. :)

The prose in the first paragraph is so dense and twisted about it almost made me give up from the beginning...unfortunately I ploughed on...not at all intriguing, not at all well written and the sex is dull and unimaginative. It's almost like it's written by someone who hasn't actually had sex...awful, just awful

I like sex with guys who are younger than me (more stamina) too. I do think, though, that I'd rather have a quickie in a dressing room than a restroom!! You could "flesh out" the prose more, cutie. Describe tastes and smells of skin and juices. Let's see what you do with your third story! :-)

Hello Readers

thank you for your insightful comments - be it positive or negative, that is what giving me the motivation to write. And I would try my best to think about the flaws and be pro-active next time.

And my third story is already pending here for approval :)

Thank you once again.

Cutest Guy

Ever since seeing 'Unfaithful' I think of the restroom scene in that.

This evokes the same feel.

Fun!

The beginning is a little confusing to follow but I like the rest of the story.

I very much enjoyed your story. The passion between the characters is obvious and intense, especially as they run for the restroom.

Great story!

sweet

like the last comment said. That was the first thing jumping to my mind too.

Lovers meeting unplanned and enjoying it.