All Comments on 'Retirement Community Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Enjoyed your story.

AtrampboyAtrampboyover 2 years ago

Love to retire to that situation, like jack I'm very Orly focused. That'd be heaven

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Whoa, there. Slow down and take your time. Let the characters and the stories develop with some richness, just like real people and really great sex.

Concept is great. Lots of fun.

JoeehartleyJoeehartleyover 2 years agoAuthor

To the anonymous commented who suggested I slow down the story. This is part 2 of a 10 part series. Part 1 answered a lot of your concerns.

Glad you enjoyed it, but no others have commented that this series moves too fast. It is intended to move fast as defined in part 1.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I'm 80 & would LOVE this imaginary place.

vodiodo69vodiodo69over 1 year ago

Where is this place?

naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4u19 days ago

Hey Joe, love the concept of this retirement complex. Would be nice to be greeted with all those hugs.

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