by Joeehartley
I love this series and look forward to reading more chapter's. I would love to retire in a place like that.
"Jack entered the cafeteria; it was more crowed" The spelling of "crowded" needs repair.
I'm looking forward to more. You've got a busy man here.
Keep going! Thanx for giving Jack a break so he can recharge. I really worried about him overdoing it! More please