All Comments on 'Returning Home'

I liked your story and I think you owe us another chapter. Don't pay any attention to any anom that can't or wont leave a name. They're only selfish and don't speak for the majority of us.

I thought this was a good start and I would love to see another chapter.

If someone leaves a critical comment they should at least have the guts to leave a name to be fair about it. Anything else is just being a coward. The story was pretty good, I look forward to the next installment. I personally think unless your writing a test on English grammar, who cares. These are masturbation stories, who cares about grammar. That should be way down on the list of importance.

I can not wait for the rest.

It would be a shame if all he got was a jerk off session, with Kate wanting to help him.

I hope to see more soon

Did not like it no incest and to short !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! a 2